Thursday, April 01, 2010

Eclipse


You ate the moon
and licked your lips in
satisfaction
while morsels dangled
from your teeth like
rotting flesh
and your contemptuous
smile
eclipsed the truth
with callous progression
congratulations
you ate the moon
I hope you're happy.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous7:16 AM

    Stunning...

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  2. Sajith John Sam12:40 PM

    Amazing fluency..
    Great...
    I hope you're a friend of loneliness
    Take care..

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  3. Curious Geroge11:54 PM

    The first line made me think I would be reading something entirely different, the next verse threw me, but in a wonderfully surprising way.
    I loved it.

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  4. Anonymous1:25 AM

    I adore this, thank you for sharing.

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