Your imagery is amazing. I love your writing style. I felt like I was running in the rain sobbing with you, feeling the bittersweet mix of anguish, and the muted joy underlying from having loved so intensely in the first place...i just wish I could give you a feeling of peace through a poem, in the same way that you have conveyed your emotions through your poetry. Unfortunately i dont tend to write much happy poetry. If you do ever want to read mine, your welcome to, you may like my style you may relate, i dont know...but i must say i do enjoy following yours.
You have an incredible gift and a beautiful face. From your writing I can also tell that you have a beautiful soul. I hope you find the happiness you seek, you deserve it.
Funny.. We always forget that often, as much as we love others, so they love us. And so we fear the loss, as much as we revel in the presence of the love. Christ, how do you do this?
Your imagery is amazing. I love your writing style. I felt like I was running in the rain sobbing with you, feeling the bittersweet mix of anguish, and the muted joy underlying from having loved so intensely in the first place...i just wish I could give you a feeling of peace through a poem, in the same way that you have conveyed your emotions through your poetry. Unfortunately i dont tend to write much happy poetry. If you do ever want to read mine, your welcome to, you may like my style you may relate, i dont know...but i must say i do enjoy following yours.
ReplyDeleteWow. You definitely have a gift for creating strong images with your words. You make people feel what you feel.
ReplyDeleteYou have an incredible gift and a beautiful face. From your writing I can also tell that you have a beautiful soul. I hope you find the happiness you seek, you deserve it.
ReplyDeletethis poem is so melancholy. i also hope you find happYness, you do truly deserve it :)
ReplyDeleteMy dear friend, have faith - in yourself, in love, in those that love you. Your time in the sun is coming...
ReplyDeletePowerful and beautiful, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteFunny.. We always forget that often, as much as we love others, so they love us.
ReplyDeleteAnd so we fear the loss, as much as we revel in the presence of the love.
Christ, how do you do this?
I'm appreciate your writing style.Please keep on working hard.^^
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