Friday, April 16, 2010

Essentials

Laconic fire
conciliate my soul
a charming dance
through amber glows
hypnotic
Cardinal brew
emancipate the high
a restless thirst
through crystal flows
exotic
Mystical note
exhilarate the core
a sanguine tune
through silence grows
chaotic

3 comments:

  1. I always wonder how could you
    write so elegantly..
    Nice work mam..

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  2. i love how the last word surprised me

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  3. It is fine, but it is a little for me it is difficult in understanding, it is a lot of allegory

    I have correctly written? Clearly?

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