Sunday, December 10, 2006

Fall

On the edge
looking down,
it seems so far to fall
take a deep breath
close your eyes
spread your wings and fly
fly to hope,
tomorrow’s child
waiting on the sun to rise
waiting on a future moon
life will not wait for you

2 comments:

myspace - viewer said...

On the edge looking down,
...where it seems so far to fall.
My breath it's deep, I close my eyes,
...then spread my wings and fly.
A fly to hope, tomorrow’s child,
...await the sun's arise.
A future moon, to coast again,
...for life (it) will not wait for you.


you write beautifully, remember who you are, there's strength...wishes for a better year to come

Itsa Mystery said...

thank you for the comments...and adaptation of my work. :)