Thursday, April 01, 2010

Eclipse


You ate the moon
and licked your lips in
satisfaction
while morsels dangled
from your teeth like
rotting flesh
and your contemptuous
smile
eclipsed the truth
with callous progression
congratulations
you ate the moon
I hope you're happy.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Stunning...

Sajith said...

Amazing fluency..
Great...
I hope you're a friend of loneliness
Take care..

Curious Geroge said...

The first line made me think I would be reading something entirely different, the next verse threw me, but in a wonderfully surprising way.
I loved it.

jadetlam said...

I adore this, thank you for sharing.