Monday, May 17, 2010

I Ran

I ran
in the dark rain
and cried
your love
a living thing
wrapped around my
heart breathing
tentacles buried
give me
life with elixir
sweet and pain
with thorns of
if this blessed
parasite should
ever die
I ran
in the dark rain
and cried


jadedchalice said...

Your imagery is amazing. I love your writing style. I felt like I was running in the rain sobbing with you, feeling the bittersweet mix of anguish, and the muted joy underlying from having loved so intensely in the first place...i just wish I could give you a feeling of peace through a poem, in the same way that you have conveyed your emotions through your poetry. Unfortunately i dont tend to write much happy poetry. If you do ever want to read mine, your welcome to, you may like my style you may relate, i dont know...but i must say i do enjoy following yours.

Anonymous said...

Wow. You definitely have a gift for creating strong images with your words. You make people feel what you feel.

Anonymous said...

You have an incredible gift and a beautiful face. From your writing I can also tell that you have a beautiful soul. I hope you find the happiness you seek, you deserve it.

airways said...

this poem is so melancholy. i also hope you find happYness, you do truly deserve it :)

Unknown said...

My dear friend, have faith - in yourself, in love, in those that love you. Your time in the sun is coming...

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sage said...

Powerful and beautiful, thanks for sharing.

Curious George said...

Funny.. We always forget that often, as much as we love others, so they love us.
And so we fear the loss, as much as we revel in the presence of the love.
Christ, how do you do this?

maybe said...

I'm appreciate your writing style.Please keep on working hard.^^

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